Reviews for dead weight
classic violet chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
I've never read a poem about wrestling before, it's really good I love the diction
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
This caught my attention for the line breaks between the first and second stanza. I thought it was very effective. The line "placing trophies on my neck" is very interestingly worded, I like that. Nice work. :)
becquerel chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
omg this is fabulous. really, the middle stanza (thos two lines) and last line are stunning. this review sucks, but keep up the good work, because this is truly wonderful.