|Reviews for Tease|
| Reeech Beeetch chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Oh so you like smutty stuff. Hahaha, who doesn't? This deserves a chapter 2.
| Fabulous as FCUK chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
| Nomad chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Another smut story...heheheh...not bad.
The ending was a surprise because it feels like another chapter is needed. You cut it on the wrong scene.
My only worries to your writing is that you wrote the same word too many times in one sentence. Also, your paragraph is too long. I have seen this with Phoenix Girl's story since you are her Beta. Try shortening it by moving on it the next paragraph.
You only need to improve your writing when it comes to sentence construction. Some are too long that can already be made into another sentence. Do not aduse the comma, dear.
Lastly, before you post please read again to correct some spellings. There are many errors on this one.
| The Phoenix Girl chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I loved Garrett's dominating character...you should write a second part for this one!
Great work girlie o
| Angia chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
(I don't know why I can't sign in on fictionpress so I hope you don't mind the anonymous review)
I loved this story a lot. You did great n.n
| TeamJacob2699 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
LOVE THIS STORY! Please make another!