Reviews for Clashing Moons
EvilSoul chapter 7 . 4/8/2012
Interesting chapter. It shows a lot about Jason's personality and that somewhy leads me to thinking that he's more of a monster than Adan is. I'm not sure of that by I get the feeling that he's more cruel and evil even if he cares for Jane (Evelynn)
EvilSoul chapter 6 . 4/8/2012
Awesome story. I really enjoyed reading it. Adan is my favourite character and i really hope eve stays with him .
Darkfairy102 chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
I like it so far, but I think it would be in your best interest to get a beta reader :) I'll continue reading!

L.L.B
Writing In Ink Forever chapter 4 . 3/17/2012
Who's POV is this? I think you'll confuse people if you don't put the name or say its in a different POV. I certaintly was confused.

This was interesting and I can't wait for more.

-Elf
EvilSoul chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Seems like it' going to be a good story. .
Writing In Ink Forever chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
Evelyn. Such a beautiful name. I love this story so far, and Jason seems like an awesome character! Jane too. Is her name Evelyn or Jane? :o I was a lol confused with that.

Anyways, update soon!

-Elf
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