Reviews for Odin
That one person chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Shit. *sniffle* I'm supposed to be the drama llama and you go and do this beautiful shit. *sniffle*
JHeartbreak chapter 1 . 3/18/2012

This story is much more plot-oriented than previous ones, but you hardly lose sight of your characterization or setting.

The whole story takes place in Coward's (Leon's?) mind, which works I think. It follows his own impressionistic stream of memories, in a Proustian way.

I think you've managed to powerfully evoke feelings in a very brief story.
Honunjama chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This was kind of strange and wistful...I'm not sure I ever really knew what was happening though...

chewychester chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
I think this story made me hold my breath. At the end I felt dizzy. Or could it have been the feeling of getting close to the center of another plane of consciousness. I liked it, thanks for posting.