|Reviews for The Gospel of America by Bookwormvideogamer13|
| Ludvig-Maxis chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Erm. Well, its an amazing idea. Frankly, I quite like the satire. I enjoyed the concept. But, well... It looked as though it was written in a half hour. And, upside down. The last three paragraphs were formatted perfectly, but one of those was an A/N, so... Two paragraphs of this story were technically "correct". Were I an English teacher, I'd fail this. BUT: As a writer myself, I understand how horrid it can be to make a story look as good as it is written. Also, the uploader has been known to screw with things, and I am reading this on a mobile phone, so it may have been worse for me.
In the end, GREAT story, less than stellar formatting. Go ahead, BookWorm, keep writing. Can't wait for your next work of comedic art :D