Reviews for Not Today
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Nicely written. I feel there should be a break between "Hoping, praying/ Within a life there is a star". Like a fullstop or something, as the two seem to read as completely seperate phrases. But otherwise...well, nice. There's some really nice imagery in here. Especially the fiery glow and the stars. And the hopes coming into fruition...reminds me of the life cycle of fruits and flowers, reaching their prime and then fading, sometimes stuck to the stem still, clinging to old life when they'd be better off letting go...
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This is a good poem, I think you got a pretty good meaning across, and i couldnt find anything really wrong with it, blaringly or otherwise.