|Reviews for Last Chance, My Brother|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/8
Why is there not a sequel. I would just love to see Lucifer make good on his word. Drag his little brother from Heaven's fold, torture and break his innocence until he himself is broken. Oh that would b interesting to read.
Sorry, I have been reading WAY too much Lucifer/Gabriel slash in Supernatural.
| NizumiBreathes chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Wow. Well written!
You can really feel the emotions.
Great job. )
| V chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
:O This is incredible Halstead. Very good dialouge. I get a good sense of the characters and Gabriel's sort of torn feeling. And I love the ending sentences, very succinct and resonating. Great job. :)
| the ticking clock chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
beautiful. the emotions, the descriptions, the tension, the ending, the title...everything about this story is AMAZING. :) brilliant job mellon!