Reviews for Last Chance, My Brother
NizumiBreathes chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Wow. Well written!

You can really feel the emotions.

Great job. )
V chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
:O This is incredible Halstead. Very good dialouge. I get a good sense of the characters and Gabriel's sort of torn feeling. And I love the ending sentences, very succinct and resonating. Great job. :)
the ticking clock chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
beautiful. the emotions, the descriptions, the tension, the ending, the title...everything about this story is AMAZING. :) brilliant job mellon!