Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love
nanashi-04 chapter 13 . 4/26/2012
Hauntingly Beautiful
citrus scented chapter 13 . 4/26/2012
all photographs lack one colour: life...thats just...gold dust, the line is memorable.
reluctant writer chapter 13 . 4/26/2012
Oh, I really liked these. I can really feel something from reading them.
un-pre-dic-ta-ble 57 chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
I love this tanka it is so good so sad to. I loved it I want to cry now.
dusk orchid chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
Hauntingly tragic. I love the part about the "radiant smile will be stolen."
myno chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
this is lovely too, but i actually liked the haiku better.
BlackDie53 chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
This is just beautiful.
nanashi-04 chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
so sad that this always happens. excellent tanka.
dollface and her cancer chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
You've mastered the art of haiku. I'm jealous.
citrus scented chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
oh i can relate, you capture such sorrow.
reluctant writer chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
Sad, but beautiful.
Jacqueline Stem chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
Love it. Sorry, but I don't think theres much else to say but that.
Katterree Fengari chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
Oo, very interesting...well, that answers my question of what does the title mean I like "the last trace" part
Ironic Presence chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
wow. again, I feel exactly the same way about someone right now. good job.
KitsuneXHana chapter 11 . 4/26/2012
A sad one. Makes one think that you're just someone looking at a picture of love but the last line proves otherwise. Nice usage. Lovely piece of work ne.
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