Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love
citrus scented chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
"smudges of love, rivers of you" thats very powerful.
catching-falling-stars chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
i like the consistency with the ice and rivers. it reminds me of winter melting into spring. and spring is the season of love! stellar job!
Jason J. Ross chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
Diorama chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
You always use the most beautiful words and phrases to convey the saddest messages. Its a wonderful touch and I hope you'll keep on using this format. Easily the best haiku I've read , Daze
Needa S chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
Sad, but awesome just the same. Write on!
Moondog Dozier chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
Good flow and good relation to the last two. Hard to string a series with this much differing meaning and yet make them compliment each other so well. Good work.
average-psycho chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
broken glass and a heart of ice arent the most original pictures but they are well done. The broken glass is my favorite of them. I like the way you keenly avoid the cliche.
citrus scented chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
very vivid image.
catching-falling-stars chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
very sweet! i love this message. it's awesome!
Oriamus Amadeus chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
That's a cool image. Melt it, river. Very nice.
admiresher chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
Short and sweet. Love it.
Jason J. Ross chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
Beautiful. I love the progression from the first one to this one.
Needa S chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
Beautifully done. Keep'em coming.
Moondog Dozier chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
Wonderfully open ended. Good haiku.
citrus scented chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
oh this really hits home. beautiful way of putting it.
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