Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love
catching-falling-stars chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
this is awesome! i can really relate to it. never stop writing!
Oriamus Amadeus chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
Nice. Just fix the typo in "guess" and you'll have it fine.
Jason J. Ross chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
A good tanka. You express the emotion very well. I like how you channel the experience into art.
Needa S chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
Touching, Nicely done. Keep up the great work.
Moondog Dozier chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
Vivid, the reader can feel this.
sixPAC chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
Powerful, descriptive. I love the depth of this haiku, exceptional.
The dead boy's poet chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
its so obsessive. i like this one.

heavy.
blackoutroses chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
wonderful, haunting words.
catching-falling-stars chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
i like it! it seems kind of magical in a sad sort of way. beautifully written and a great inspiration!
citrus scented chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
oh morbid and compelling; this is heartwrneching.
Jason J. Ross chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
This whole sequence is great. I admire those that utilize the healing properties of art.
notso darling chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
At first i thought this poem was for Kristallnacht (the night of broken glass)but the twist in the last line made it all the more personal. Good work
betalight chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
Wonderful.
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
The corrext structure for a tanka is 5-7-5-7-7, but despite that, I like this. It is beautifully done. For some reason, I think you would make beautiful lanturnes as well.
catseyeview chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
just wow! you're a beautiful writer. I will be sure to return back to your latest poem. It's helped me spark the will to write again. I haven't really written much in a while. Thank you.
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