|Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love|
| born-again chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
Beautiful imagery with the roses, great poem.
| sage-of-solitude chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
I especially like the phrase "merciful clarity" and the imagery of burying a "wilted dream." Nice job and thanks for the reviews.
| AllyCred chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
really loved this tankas are just really beautiful, i love them. this was great though had a lot of emotion and feeling pouring out. lots of love AllyCred
| Steel Winged Angel chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
Wow...this is amazing! I love it! I got hooked on tankas for awhile on TPS and I had a blast with it. Your writing is beautiful. Very very very nicely done. HawkePS thanks for the reviews.
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
perfect perfect perfect
| poetic abortion chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
I love this so much. This tanka stirred up so much emotion as I read. A brillant work and holds so much meaning. Well done !
* Noelle *
| Manuel Fajar chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
Clear water—cools smooth,
Poured libation—rose unfolds,
But I noticed from one stem,
Dropped one red tear,—naught was said.
| simpleplan13 chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
interesting description.. great poem.. tahnks for your review
| linaeve chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
oh, what beautiful images. i enjoyed the parallelism there between the roses & the narrator's dream.
| white-clouds chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
Strong emotions expressed in so little words.
| me10 chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
i really dont understand how you managed to combine so much in 13 words! its amazing! very talented. the words are perfect to describe it and short but simple. awesome work.
| Oath chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
I am always speechless after reading such greatly written haiku's; now that is talent if you can fit that much meaning and emotion in a haiku. It doesn't feel forced but flows rather nicely... im in awe i admit, very breautiful and the title is more than appropriate. *Very* nicely done. fav
| poetic abortion chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
Beautiful ! Stunning. So realistic. o
| godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
I can relate totally and completely. Gorgeously written, a perpetual aching pushed quietly to the back of the mind. Great job.
| My Mental Disaster chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
Your haikus are brilliant, i cannot say how much i admire your well chosen and perhaps perfect words...I would gather a universe of meaning from this poem even if I did not already guess your inspiration.