|Reviews for Amber and Seaweed|
| Luneko chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
This is a very pretty little poem. I love the imagery, which I find both eloquent and accessible. The poem is nothing grandiose or pretentious - it's a beautiful, simple expression of appreciation of beauty.
| kloun mannequin chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I like that a lot, it's a kind memoir.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
Truly creative. I like how the end lines really make this more than just a wonderful form work. Well written and imaganitive.
| myno chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
I know, FP formatting is a nightmare. Nevertheless, this poem is a masterpiece.
| GypsyMothra chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
Sometimes, I believe FP is immune to formatting. I have come to learn to ignore ...'s. Nevertheless, lovely poem. Very fluid, like seaweed. :) Sorry. I had to say it.
| Needa S chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
FP hinder us at times. Beautiful write just the same.
| Ironic Presence chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
hey, that was pretty cool! I like the format and how it ties in at the end.
| greenGalilee chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
Really good job with the shape. Don't worry about the dots-it's FP's fault, not yours. This was really creative, and it worked well. I tried my hand at shaping poetry, but it ended up quite cheesy and terrible. You've managed it, though. (I especially like the last two lines.)
| hidden jewel chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
Thank-You first of all for reviewing my poetry.
Your poem really touched my heart, brought tears to my eyes. You know, I've been out of touch with God for a while now, but reading your poetry makes me want to give my talent to him. And I wish I could use my gift like you.
| AntiPleasure chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
Wow, beautiful descriptions. I like that repitition of "fill" in the last part. Nicely done.
| Getuie chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
The form of this poem aided the message so well. And such a compelling message it is. I like the comparison you draw between you and the see and the second stanza has to be my favourite.
| Erlkoenigin chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
Wunderschön! Wahrscheinlic sollte das Ganze eigentlich auch die Form einer Welle haben?
P.S. noch so ein Gedicht und ich packe die Koffer und fahre ans Meer
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Was für eine schöne Liebeserklärung! Schon der Titel ist wunderbar poetisch.