Reviews for Nature's Path
one.more.sunrise chapter 6 . 6/7/2012
I think the best one is #6, A Walk in the Woods:) I like these a lot, you really captured whatever the poem was about. Maybe give your writing a bit more meaning/depth though, something beyond description and imagery( very very nice imagery, mind you!). Please check out my writing, I'm kind of new to Fictionpress:)
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Nice little poem, I think a couple of words could be changed to give it a bit more impact though, for example instead of "And the hummingbird's call", you could have "And hear the hummingbird's call". The little things can make a big difference. Putting my picky-ness aside, this is still a nice poem :) Well done! :)
Nita Flower chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
Good job. this is very nice. i like
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
This was good. I enjoyed it very much. You are definitely off to a good start. Keep writing; you are doing very well! :)