Reviews for Swan Song
this wild abyss chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
[From the Review Marathon, link in profile]

I like how you use both exposition and dialogue here because it gives the poem a more rounded feel to it. I also like the strong emotion and imagery here because it really serves to bring your message across and make a big impact on your readers.
Roseanimal chapter 3 . 3/21/2012
These are great, and I can see you've taken a lot of time on them, instead of just scribbling some words with syllables down.