Reviews for Cinder |
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![]() ![]() For some reason as I was reading I thought that a good summary would be "the Prince teaches Cinderella BDSM (not clickbait)" I loved it! I've been bum-rush reading your stories here and oooooooou! I live your style of writing! It's very expressive and dare i say, explosive! Even with the shorter pieces I understand and appreciate the characters so much in the words you give! Thank you for such an interesting story |
![]() ![]() I forgot to add; cinderella's name was ella. Cinder couldn't be cinder all life! You should find him nice name and he wouldn't have a problem with telling it to lord |
![]() ![]() We all saw it coming xd but it was interesting and smexy- good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Cinder! But in the end he found his happiness. I very very like your story. It's nicely written. :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg... can I just take a moment and say, how much I love you right now? XD This story was great, I really loved everything about it; however the ending was a little too 'ta-da' for the build up you worked so hard for... Yet, everything else about Cinder- even his name- I loved! :3 I thought the idea of it was great, adding in a 'Dragon Lord' was epic; instead of the 'prince.' However, you forgot one of the main morals to the story... the retribution to the evils of the Step-mother and Step-brothers... I don't believe without that this story could be considered complete! :/ This was totally my kind of kink, I'm loving you so much for this right now! ;7 Thanks for the great read, -RPS |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful, simply beautiful :] I wish there would be more stories as good as this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm, so interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome! So happy Cinder got his happy ending :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was BEAUTIFUL! Positively AMAZING! Normally I don't have the heart to read through fics where the characters are abused but I had a feeling the Dragon Lord was going to come to the rescue in the end so I just HAD to finish it. You're a wonderful writer and I loved how easily I was drawn into the story and the unlikely plot. It was just...perfect :) |
![]() ![]() I liked this story up until the fairy godmother had "manicured nails." Okay, she also has wings, and there's a dragon prince, but this is a medieval setting. I assume medieval settings don't have salons and OPAL nail polish and nail buffers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what exactly to make of this. From just a reader's POV I love the twist to the Cinderella story by adding in the dragon twist and the prolonged an emotional level, I hate part of this because I always have a hard time getting through the rape scenes because of how helpless the main character is and how damaging such events are to the mind. I have to admit though that it adds a certain flavor to the story with all the ..."proclivities" as you call it haha. So I'm half loving and hating this story which makes it all the more interesting and a must read for those that are more experienced and mentally ready to read such stories like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is actually very nice. At first I thought it was one of those cliche fictions based on the fairy tale again, but the twist claims otherwise. It's a good read and I think people should really take time to read this story. Great job.. ) |
![]() ![]() Awww, I loved this so much. _ It was a good story. At times, I wanted to stop reading, I admit. But that was cuz of Cinder's step brothers. -_- They made me really angry and disgusted. But I'm really glad Cinder got to be happy in the end. _ Sorry for my short review. I really liked the story. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story got far less reviews than it should, it is AWESOME. It was written well and everything was described marvelously, although I wish it had a sequel _ Nice job 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word wicked. I admit it is a cliche but you gave it a nice and worth reading spin. Kudos for original spin. Oh and welcome back. :) |