I like this original version than the revised. You could have continued this instead of rewriting I think..

Will you continue this as a crack fic?

Grrrr. Now I must go to your profile. This story is awesome. *grumbles* please keep writing!

That fight scene was one of the funniest I have ever read. EVER. I am an adult male and I laughed so hard I actually started giggling. Oh man I love this girls anger management issues.

This is laugh out loud funny. I love the site name dropping too.

Well damn I'd like to read more but if you've run out of steam then oh well, I guess.

okay, i start reading your story from tm. i absolutely loved the plot. Characters too. and i really am looking forward to your update. please make it fast. AAAAnnnnnnnnnndddddddd please start writing detailed chaps phuleeezzz.!This aint enough. :D

great updates xxx

This story is great. I'm totally the type that kills people with kindness but I have a full dialogue running in my head of what I really want to say, but the only people that get that version are me and my best friends when I rant later. So I absolutely love how she's just without a filter!

WOW I LOVE THIS STROY PLEASE UPDATE MANY CHAPTER IN THE NEXT DAY OR SO I BEG YOU

Just one suggestion: Couldn't Nami cry, like, real crying from exhaustion and make 'Michaels' soften? I mean, that would make things interesting from there. I hope you consider it! Thanks!

Glad that you're finally back here! I miss Nami and Michaels! TT_TT

I can't. This NEEDS to be updated. Sosososo good.

I love this story so much! Please update soon!

Can't wait till the next chapter!