Reviews for Boys & Detentions
RayGasan chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
Yesh! I can't wait to see Michaels' reaction when he finds out what Vincent has done to Nami! And he's actually friends with Vincent?
Infernal love chapter 7 . 7/10/2014
Don't be so hard on yourself! I feel that the lack of threats and the more serious parts captivated me more. You are doing a fine job, keep at it!
Infernal love chapter 4 . 7/10/2014
Can I just say,
I love your work to the moon and back, and I don't know what to with myself because this is such an amazing story so far. I absolutely adore your work!
Kirihime chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
I rather have more chapters than longer chapters. How long will that be true I don't know, but I do know that I'm excited to see how this turns out. I thought Vincient was dating Mandy since she said he was picking her up and all, but I guess they could be friends. I can't believe Micheals knows Vincient. Shouldn't he know about Nami then ? I have goosebumps and I really want to know.
ParisianCoffeeKat chapter 10 . 6/26/2014
oh my gawd this was totally worth the wait! the end of the argument made me explode into a fit of giggles until i couldn't breathe! i totally can't wait for the next chapter
KillWithKindness chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
Oh my lord. I am guffaw in horrendously. I love this story! Sounds kinda howI feel about people lmfao. Great writing, keep it up. :)
Kirihime chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
Had to reread but it's nice. I felt like Ms. Smith was mentioned earlier only to not find her. While she seems rather random her extensive knowledge suggests she's been in the background for so long that she is a common place in the protagonist's life. Very much like anger management. I loved seeing her a bit relaxed. Micheal seems to constantly keep her on her toes and while it seems aggravating its a different mood then Mandy keep in her on her toes. That sounded rather long winded and unpurposeful. Anyway looking forward to next chat. And more Micheals too. We were so close to finding out why he's such a big shot. So close. Hopefully the next chap.
EllySky chapter 10 . 6/22/2014
She should stick to one word answers. might help. xxxxx
CharismaCure18 chapter 10 . 6/22/2014
God, I am in love with your writing style... This story keeps me SO interested and amused! Like for real! To be honest, your writing and not to mention your character is so damn relatable it freaks me the hell out! I wrote a story so similar to this before I read the later chapters of course, and my character is hot headed too, with a past of liking a guy but getting rejected who haunts her mind by saying "I don't like girls like her" and when that came up in this chapter it was so uncanny! Do we share the same brain, Nami? I'm beginning to think yes! I was so excited to see when chapter 10 have my email a notification! I was like "HOLY SHEEYITE! MUST READ BEFORE I COLLAPSE LIKE A HOT DAY FULL OF MONKEY BALLS-" you get the picture! Anyway, I thought the intense seen between Mandy and Nami was freaking great. I love how you also added comments from the classmates that surrounded them too! Usually, when an epic scene happens between two individuals in a crowd or something lets say, the author totally forgets to acknowledge their existence as well! Your writing style is just very creative and realistic, that it makes me sad more authors can't take similar methods in writing a story that makes me want to re-read it like this one does. By the way, Vincent sounds like a complete douche canoe, hope he rots and hell and realizes what a catch Nami is when she's with Michaels- he better be in the next chapter! I miss him! Haha :P oh and the little snippet with Ms. Smith and Nami was very comical with the dad, that cracked me up! XD I full engage in all these new characters you're throwing in and that so AWEOME! I hope you update super soon since it's summer! For I shall do the same! Reading you story gives me motivation to get back into writing and I believe I shall! I look forward into seeing what happens next, and I don't believe I have a prediction for it either, it's pretty unpredictable! LOVE YOU NAMI! :D (in a non-creepy stalkerish way!)
Simon chapter 9 . 6/20/2014
This actually seems like a tragedy. Say goodbye to any good university with that record, lol.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
WTF I can't even read it properly with all the weird writing and I have waited a long time for this story to update XD
pastelcolors chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
... oh no! The coding. D:
Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2014
Plz plz plz update XD
Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2014
Plz update can't wait for da next chapter XD
Guest chapter 9 . 5/28/2014
I LOVE dis story I have been waiting ages for you to update it and I can honestly say it was worth the wait nw I can't wait for the next chapter bt plz don't take too long updating XD
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