Reviews for Boys & Detentions
EllySky chapter 10 . 6/22/2014
She should stick to one word answers. might help. xxxxx
CharismaCure18 chapter 10 . 6/22/2014
God, I am in love with your writing style... This story keeps me SO interested and amused! Like for real! To be honest, your writing and not to mention your character is so damn relatable it freaks me the hell out! I wrote a story so similar to this before I read the later chapters of course, and my character is hot headed too, with a past of liking a guy but getting rejected who haunts her mind by saying "I don't like girls like her" and when that came up in this chapter it was so uncanny! Do we share the same brain, Nami? I'm beginning to think yes! I was so excited to see when chapter 10 have my email a notification! I was like "HOLY SHEEYITE! MUST READ BEFORE I COLLAPSE LIKE A HOT DAY FULL OF MONKEY BALLS-" you get the picture! Anyway, I thought the intense seen between Mandy and Nami was freaking great. I love how you also added comments from the classmates that surrounded them too! Usually, when an epic scene happens between two individuals in a crowd or something lets say, the author totally forgets to acknowledge their existence as well! Your writing style is just very creative and realistic, that it makes me sad more authors can't take similar methods in writing a story that makes me want to re-read it like this one does. By the way, Vincent sounds like a complete douche canoe, hope he rots and hell and realizes what a catch Nami is when she's with Michaels- he better be in the next chapter! I miss him! Haha :P oh and the little snippet with Ms. Smith and Nami was very comical with the dad, that cracked me up! XD I full engage in all these new characters you're throwing in and that so AWEOME! I hope you update super soon since it's summer! For I shall do the same! Reading you story gives me motivation to get back into writing and I believe I shall! I look forward into seeing what happens next, and I don't believe I have a prediction for it either, it's pretty unpredictable! LOVE YOU NAMI! :D (in a non-creepy stalkerish way!)
Simon chapter 9 . 6/20/2014
This actually seems like a tragedy. Say goodbye to any good university with that record, lol.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
WTF I can't even read it properly with all the weird writing and I have waited a long time for this story to update XD
pastelcolors chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
... oh no! The coding. D:
Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2014
Plz plz plz update XD
Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2014
Plz update can't wait for da next chapter XD
Guest chapter 9 . 5/28/2014
I LOVE dis story I have been waiting ages for you to update it and I can honestly say it was worth the wait nw I can't wait for the next chapter bt plz don't take too long updating XD
yeoz chapter 9 . 4/19/2014
Ahhhh shit! ! :D thaat was some good stuff! ! Really hit the spot! Heheheh. ...sooo...this story is my new addiction...but seriously...that was awesome ! :D i love stories where the plot is unpredictable and crazy :) had to pry my crying eyeballs off the screen when i finished the chapter: '( i just wanna sigh and sit with a dreamy look on my face :D ... she's one crazy chica who i cant help but love :) and those anger issues. ...damn! XD :D know the begging to update or we do something drastic to ourselves from withdrawal from our "addiction" hehehehe. ...later! ;P
Guest chapter 9 . 3/31/2014
Wow! I love this story. Nami sounds so much like me, except for the swearing(I just do that in my head), but I have anger management issues too. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm so excited. Please keep writing, its amazing. However, u should really try n proof read your work, because there are grammatical and spelling errors and some sentences are missing words. Other then that...Well done!
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 9 . 3/28/2014
I've missed reading this! Amazing chapter! :D
PeanutCookiesXD chapter 9 . 3/25/2014
Hehehehe Nami is the best badass ever
CharismaCure18 chapter 9 . 3/24/2014
I loved this much. Even though it only briefly showed Michaels, it had me grinning the entire time! Seriously, even though she has some serious anger issues to work out, her character depth is, how do I put it? So realistic. Perhaps some people would disagree with me due to her very bold, witty, yet character isn't very heard of, she truly does remind me of myself, and I can't help but wonder why that's why I love her character so much is simply 'cause I can relate so much to her. Michaels? Well, he's an awesome character too, who I can't wait to learn about the core of his personality! This chapter gave me some good laughs, and I hope Nami is not really suspended! That principle was truly ignorant, even if Nami's long contradiction speech was brutal, all truth was in it, haha! I'm predicting that the principle isn't going to suspend her, but will give her an extended detention days, and so thus, her relationship with Michaels will continue to grow! I can't wait for your next chapter, I really do enjoy this story like no other! Keep up the good work. :)
TMi The Dork in the Corner chapter 9 . 3/24/2014
Interesting story you got here, I hope you keep it going and update soon!
ParisianCoffeeKat chapter 9 . 3/23/2014
Amazing! This is so hilarious! Really good, actually, really amazingly awesomeness.
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