Stealing my character names much, Tina? HAHAHA :P Gain some originality ;D You may be my bestie but they are still my characters :PP WUV YOU. GOOD JOB :DDD3 I'll be your grammer dork if ya need me :3

An interesting start.

I am so sorry, i know you said you didnt want to be criticized, but there was a plot hole glaring at me. It's easy to fix, and i thought i should point it out.

"You see, Nick was my ex boyfriend for two years till I dumped his sorry ass, because I caught him cheating on me with the biggest slut in our school, Olivia Quincy, on our one year anniversary, two weeks ago."

You said they were together for 2 years, but broke up on their 1 year anniversary. Just change one of those numbers and you'll be good to go.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter(s). Good luck!