Reviews for Shall I compare thee to a winter's day?
Tatiana chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Please don't take this the wrong way, but I have a few criticisms. You need to brush up a bit on your Shakespearian grammar, there is no such word as 'thou's' but instead 'thy' or 'thine'. Also, I don't understand the metaphor of the frozen feather at the end. Besides those two, I have no more criticisms, nice imagery, keep up the good work (sheesh I sound like my teacher).