|Reviews for The Date|
| Pheonix DeLoures chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
This was very well written, and I very much enjoyed the diction and interaction between Gage and Chet.
The ending was a bit of a twist, though, as stated in the last review, sort of given away by the summary. But what can ya do.
| Haradria chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Nice short story, good feel to it, and well done. Although I can't say I didn't see it coming (summaries for short stories are always giveaways, I know), it was still well played out, well described, and the characters were effectively established. Certainly enjoyed the twist regardless. I might say my only problem was the explanation at the end, but it's more of a personal problem than any literary problem, considering it was still a good explanation and cleared up things that would be otherwise be overkill to the story. All in all, great story, thanks for the read!