Reviews for Maths
Breecheese63 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Well obviously I like myself a good lemon sometimes ;D I unfortunately felt that this piece was a little mechanical almost like very blunt and dead noted, you should add more of your personality and creativity into it or perhaps develop your characters a bit more, the concept I thought was okay but needs a little but of work :) but keep writing
Dark Angel Princess Sarah chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
is this based on a tv show, cuz if it is ur really supposed to put it on fanfiction :)