Reviews for Destruction
Pink Schmetterling chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Hi! This story was REALLY powerful, which is surprising because it starts out seeming as if it's going to be kind of light, fluffy and farcical. Really sad ending...and very well written, the description was extremely vivid and made it very easy to picture what was happening. Only a couple of grammatical things; it changes from third person to first person in one or two places (i think when the lunatic guy is yelling is a place where this happens,) and it also changes from past to present tense in a few places. But this is REALLY well done and a great story. Awesome!