Great job! I'm really interested to see where this is headed :)

Have you ever read Graffiti Moon? If not, I highly recommend it. I think you'd like it.

You miss a word or two now and then, but it's easy to fill in the blanks. Other than that your story is still going strong. I like your art ideas too ;)

Awesome interaction. My mom is a painter too, so this is relatable material. Excellent stuff.

I really like this, and that's a good thing because I haven't found anything I like on this site yet. Your story and your characters are interesting without sounding contrived or fantastic. You have just enough detail to make things realistic without sounding cheesy, and even your secondary characters have enough minor details to shape them without being overbearing. I especially like the tone and style of your writing. Thanks for sharing this!

it is very good i hope that you will wright more to it

This sounds really good! Update soon!

I really liked this. they way you contrasted concrete and more absract details gives it an interesting tone

It's beautiful. Standing by for an update (: