|Reviews for From Beginning To End|
| Charchar777 chapter 15 . 1/26/2017
please update this story !
| crazydaisyyy chapter 15 . 11/10/2015
| crazydaisyyy chapter 13 . 11/10/2015
IT WAS A DREAM OMG? :(
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2015
You write super. It's your punctuation that I worry about. But I feel reluctant to call you up on it, because it's the lack of proper punctuation that's allowing you to achieve a flow I seldom see. For eg,
I shrugged, "Is that normal?" (This is a made-up line, but uses similar punctuation you use.)
This is incorrect.
It should be:
I shrugged. "Is that normal?"
No commas before dialogue, unless it's a word related to speech. Shrugged isn't a speech word, it's a verb or action word.
But yet, when you phrased it with that incorrect punctuation, it just has a better flow, you know? Comma momentary pause. Period significant pause. The difference between reading a sentence constructed with commas and periods is huge, and changes the flow. However, if you were to publish this, a good editor will call you up on this.
| voidxtiles chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
I read this before, but can't quite recall the whole plot and the ending. Was this finished before and did you take the rest down? I remember it being a great story and I want to read it again. Please put the rest back up.
| Ann Wildsworth chapter 15 . 9/9/2015
This is my first time reading this story, and as I got closer to the last few chapters, I realized that the whole story wasn't up.
Maaaaan I'm heartbroken now.
Please keep us updated. I hope I can read this as a published story someday. Or just read it.
You are a talented author and I adored your story, so far.
| jvwalton chapter 15 . 8/31/2015
This breaks my heart. I love coming back to this story and reading it over and over. It makes my heart happy. I'll miss you Crystal and Jake! Until we meet again!
| Imaginary Girl xox chapter 15 . 8/30/2015
Please, please, please continue this! You just can't leave people hanging like that!
| Lexie.Loo chapter 15 . 8/26/2015
Damn was wondering why I kept getting an 'author is updating chapters' message the other day when I was trying to finish the story, now it looks like I can't :( Certainly not my first time reading it, but can't quite recall how it wraps up :( happy you're getting it published though, just hope it comes out soon.
| Ophelia Lake chapter 54 . 3/4/2015
OMG...Seriously the best. Seriously! You rock. And I love Jake.
| Ophelia Lake chapter 39 . 3/3/2015
But I don't want to like Marcus...
| Ophelia Lake chapter 37 . 3/3/2015
Yes. I would buy it! Totally.
| Ophelia Lake chapter 36 . 3/3/2015
Now... You just need Jake. I imagine he isn't going to see it as Crystal loving him enough to let him go...bet he's going to be pretty upset...
| Ophelia Lake chapter 27 . 3/3/2015
Ohh My God...
Yes, I knew it! (Fist bump for your awesomeness ). Now tell Jake to wake his lazy butt up! His family needs him. Awwwwwwwwwww
| Ophelia Lake chapter 22 . 3/3/2015
More Crystal and Jake...yay!