Wooohooo loved it so much I loved how the characters are so smoothly introduced and how you set the chemistry on track perfectly great work

Great :) I like that you place the story at an ordinary place, it makes it stand out from all those stories taking place at parties etc (not that there's anything wrong with those stories :))

dis is awesum she is deffo blod yet SEXY ;) good one

I liked this! Very well written too :)

I loved this, it was different - in a good way, of course! Really cute. :)

I loved this! It was so funny and really sweet! Brilliant.

Your really amazing, you know that right?

Tee hee hee. Sorry, had to say that. Felt the need.

Anyways, this story is just... Phenominal. I'm jealous. Mindblowingly jealous. You're just so... TALENTED.

Haha I'm quite gushy, but hey, that's how I feel at the moment. Your descriptions of blurry lights helped me see a whole new side to the pains (although I don't personally experience them) of not having clear vision.

This story just captured me. I'm supposed to be writing an essay right now, but I won't start until I get through all of your stories, and probably favorite all of them as I am about to for this one right... Now.

:) Thanks for posting, glad I clicked the "View Story" button to have such an eye opening experience with this.

-CD

Good stuff! ;]

bloody brilliant. yeah. thats it:D

This was such a cute story. I loved it.

Also, about the near-sightedness? I know exactly what you mean. For example, I remember Las Vegas only as blurred images, pretty lights, and very hot days because by glasses broke during the trip. It kinda is like being on some drugs, I imagine xD

Brilliant. Absolutely freaking perfect. I was about to spew a whole load of other useless nonsense but I think my first two (masterpiece) sentences do the job nicely.

I like the idea about her being visually impaired. It really does get annoying sometimes. I find it cute how she kissed him all those times, making excuses for it. Spontaneous job! :D

Very nice, well done

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IT! and um yeah. this is super adorable and you need to write more! :D