Reviews for Afraid of the Dark
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Slightly spooky, a little short but this time I'll let you off considering the fact that you are still recovering from writer's block, but I still like the story! Good work.
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Good idea. I like the last paragraph. I think you need more detail in the rest (showing vs. telling and all that happy crappy), and I think the exposition on his house and that other stuff ("My mom, dad, sister and me all live in a small two story house. We live in the country side so are closest neighbor is still about a ten minute drive. It can get lonely sometimes but at least I have an older sister who plays with me. My sister, Rachel, is four years older than me at eleven. We usually spend our days playing outside since all we have inside to do is watch TV and read. With my very limited options I decide to watch TV probably the rest of the night until I go to bed.") wasn't needed, and you stopped the momentum of the story to tell us all that. In a mini-story like this, momentum is everything.

Good to see another story from you :).

-REB