Reviews for Fighter
dokidokipanic chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
one tough dude you sing of...
Haley Natasha Schmidt chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
really deep... i'll think about this next time i wake from a nightmare!
The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Excellent haiku, excellent immagery, great idea

never heard of the phrase "hammer-like fists"

Keep Writing!

ReadigK's
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
soft effective. I imagine a little girl whose had an argument and she feels all alone. Brill piece :-D
Nirvash Serpentine chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I'm imagining an orphan teenage girl who was left with nothing.

She hates everything...

She sees no hope in her present life..

All there is for her...is revenge.
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I get an image of a stone warrior sleeping, ready to physically fight off any nightmares that might threaten her. Quite epic, especially for 13 words. Great job!
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Nice! Well done! Keep it up! :)

-Shauni