Reviews for Fighter
dokidokipanic chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
one tough dude you sing of...
Haley Natasha Schmidt chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
really deep... i'll think about this next time i wake from a nightmare!
The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Excellent haiku, excellent immagery, great idea

never heard of the phrase "hammer-like fists"

Keep Writing!

AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
soft effective. I imagine a little girl whose had an argument and she feels all alone. Brill piece :-D
Nirvash Serpentine chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I'm imagining an orphan teenage girl who was left with nothing.

She hates everything...

She sees no hope in her present life..

All there is for revenge.
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I get an image of a stone warrior sleeping, ready to physically fight off any nightmares that might threaten her. Quite epic, especially for 13 words. Great job!
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Nice! Well done! Keep it up! :)