|Reviews for The Sudden Visibility of Sound|
| Meg chapter 12 . 1/2
Hi, I was wondering do you still write or post your writings online anywhere, that you would be willing to share? After so many years and years, I always eventually come back to this original work by you and enjoy re-reading it and always wished I could see what else you might be writing.
I remember going on your tumblr but the link is gone now.
Well anyway if not, thanks for sharing your works all that time ago. I had wonderful days and hours reading it when I was younger.
| RemiDaria001 chapter 12 . 8/13/2021
Uhhhh I really shouldn't have read that... -.- I'm too innocent for this...
:) I CAN'T HELP IT I love your characters, your ways with words! IDK if you still write, but I hope so. :D
| RemiDaria001 chapter 11 . 7/16/2021
I just saw that theres one more chapter am I'm acully really sad. I hope u have more! Love ur writing
| omgxD chapter 12 . 2/19/2018
What sad yet sweet ending! It was interesting how it was in Tally's POV, but I like it! Also Caid, even though he's blind, is so badass and he's my favorite character in this story! Joshua is also really good, and Caid x Joshua are awesome and I ship them so so hard! Tally's cool too! Caid's ex boyfriend...I think it was Eric? Well I didn't really like him. He was ruining the ship and I just in general didn't like character too much, but I respect him because of all the drama he made xD Great story and whenever I'm bored or feel like reading, it's always this 1 I come too!
| Estrellagrace chapter 12 . 1/15/2018
This was really cute, a bit disappointed that this is discontinued and that the end wasn't written longer, but I still really loved it. Caid has my love, and I still think Josh an asshole...but then again so is Caid! Oh, the pettiness.
| serwaverider chapter 6 . 8/26/2016
Bullying a blind guy, what a sad excuse of a person. His DNA should not be passed on, not a person to marry.
| Marvolo.R chapter 12 . 3/16/2016
Oh god I seriously hate you a little now ; ( the worst thing for a reader to happen is a discontinuation of a story :( especially a good one such as this. well, even though you said there won't be anymore chapters I'll still wait for them. Hopefully the continuation will come :)
| Marvolo.R chapter 8 . 3/16/2016
I love Caid's attitude here, such a bad boy : and Josh should just man up and take what he wants :P
| rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 12 . 2/22/2016
After years of waiting for an update, here it is. It hurts my heart to see this story end so abruptly, but I'm happy there is some closure. I will never forget these characters, for I love them dearly even after all these years. I hope you find inspiration for more stories and that you don't let you talent as a beautiful writer slip away. Thanks for the story, and stay strong.
| Wordyma chapter 12 . 1/15/2016
I really appreciate the closure. Great story, hot and sweet and awesom. Plus well written!
| oakleyeatsyou chapter 12 . 8/17/2015
I'm crying because those words were "Come home" right?
YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER
| Starlite Nightfall chapter 12 . 7/13/2015
Awwww, I was waiting for this story to update for so long, and I'm sad it had to end so suddenly! I really do like this ending, though! Wrapped everything up nicely and made it short and sweet and I'm so happy they ended up together. I feel awful for Tally, but you can't stand in the way of a love like that. That's a once in a lifetime thing and I hope she finds that for herself as well! Thanks for finishing up this story! It was beautiful!
| Fionaalex chapter 12 . 7/5/2015
Great story thank you!
| atenea-in-the-sky chapter 12 . 4/19/2015
I loved this. Thanks so much for giving us a closure! This ending fits perfectly.
| Soraru chapter 12 . 3/26/2015
The ending was amazing. I can't thank you enough for the happy end; for Caid, Josh, AND Tally.