|Reviews for The Sudden Visibility of Sound|
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 7 . 3/1
Still loving your story very much. I like the realism once again, how everything is not clear cut but tangled together - that's the way life is whether one likes it or not. You capture it so well, just as you do dialogue. Honestly I feel as though I could pick up a coffee mug and sit down with your characters and join in the conversation, that's how realistic it feels to me. Great chapter, great story. Thanks.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 2/26
I really liked your opening chapter, it made me smile as I read it. I like your story's title too, rather enigmatic yet fitting the subject. Nice work.
| The Infinity chapter 11 . 2/6
Good GOD but you're brilliant. I am literally on edge. I want the rest of this story. God I want the rest. I want more of them. You can make me laugh, my heart ache, and make me all hot and bothered all in the same chapter. You write m/m like no one else can. It just feels so REAL. And so right. Please come back to this story. I am begging you.
| Atenea217 chapter 1 . 2/4
Ohh I wish you would update! But it's been so long I guess it's hopeless to wish so.
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/4
Ohh I wish you would update! But it's been so long I guess I guess it's hopeless to wish so.
| InsanityAndBeyond chapter 7 . 1/31
I never normally do the review each chapter thing, but since I feel guilty for having too often read amazing stories and not properly expressed my appreciation, i'm kinda doing it. sorry if thats annoying. God I don't know what I'll do if this story doesn't have a definitive and happy ending for these two.
| InsanityAndBeyond chapter 6 . 1/31
ahmygawwdddd. So they did have past history, I knew SOMETHING had to have happened.
I knew I would be in for a load of angst in this story because of the whole 'sister's fiance' thing. Apparently I have a vicious part inside me that likes to be kept in emotional turmoil over fictional characters.
| InsanityAndBeyond chapter 5 . 1/31
Josh is just so ..nice. Seriously, these characters are just amazing. Why am I getting hooked on a story I know hasnt been updated in a year? whyyyyy?
| 412Chie chapter 11 . 12/22/2013
i wonder, what will happen then? is this story finish here, or you just have something planned with it? there's so much to be answered here. well, if you even publish this story could you let me know where to get them. i just love it and wanted more...
| Yuu Yoshino chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. ITS HURTING ME MENTALLY. I MISS THEM SO MUCH IM READING IT FOR THE 3RD TIME...I GET DEPRESSED...
| Yuu Yoshino chapter 11 . 11/27/2013
Come in D; write the next chapter plsssss
| Yuu Yoshino chapter 4 . 11/25/2013
I love it a lot so far _ really making me wanna read all of it right now xD i've read 4 chapters straight until it was like 2 am and i went to sleep. Tomorrow, first thngs first, im reading more of this story. Hehe :3
| elenabee chapter 11 . 11/17/2013
dying please update i don't care if it's terrible i love you anyway
| S Beau-Chateau chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I read Drunken Text (amazing btw and added a full review on Goodreads :-)) but this one... It has just ripped out my lungs and stopped me breathing for the last half an hour.
When can we expect more?!
Amazing, you rock ;-)
| KashiRyuu chapter 11 . 10/27/2013
I don't really hah anything to say. This phase left me breath less and word less.