love it so far! so looking forward to seeing what is in store next. :)

This was fantastic. I love the story line, I love your writing style and I love your characters. I sincerely hope that you write more of this.

I'm really liking this a lot so far! I know it's only one chapter in but I can't see him falling for Josh at all, so that should be interesting. I do like Josh though, obnoxious and rude as he is.

Can't wait for chapter 2!

Like it! Hope you update soon :)

Looks good,i find the plot to be very interesting and i'm loving the characters already even though it's only the first chapter.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Till next time.

This story's got a lot of potential, and was nice to read this longish chapter (very good size I think).

The tagline says he's going to fall in love with Josh...? But I like Eric too. Maybe it will be complicated and messy. Caid's blindness reminds me of Kellan's amnesia.

I'd love to beta but I've been so busy lately. I'll send you a message if I think I can fit it in reasonably. I'm already beta-ing two other stories (or maybe three. I can't remember.) But just so you know, if you get me, I'm like, the best. Yeah.

Great start, you have me hooked already! Your writing is very clean and has a good flow to it, so it's easy to read.

In just one chap, I already like Caid a lot; Josh is rather irritating, but I'm assuming that will soon change; Tally seems nice; and Eric was so cute trying to ask out our hero (I like him a lot too)!

Looking forward to the next update, so keep up the great work!

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG A NEW STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY.

YOU'VE MADE MY DAY;

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Gahh! You have the power to turn the most normal plot into something completely amazing, based solely on the substance of your characters. I don't know how you do it so well. It's good to see another chapter fic from you. Though, I got to the end and I was like "I want mooore!" Doubled-edged sword, there.

Man, you churn out these things like butter, too. Actually, butter's a great analogy for it. They're so smooth, and probably bad for your health, and I could get into the butter-up-your-buns innuendos, but that may be taking it too far.

Also, for clarification, Josh and Tally are around 24, right?

Good luck with this!

wow, story sounds really interesting! josh seems like a major jerk! please update soon!

I only ever log in for you!

First things first, you're on a writing role! I don't think you've ever written a story that I didn't love to pieces. Amazing talent my dear. Simply amazing.

Second... I love Caid already. You always write like, these stories that would totes be a challenge for me but you seem to do them so flawlessly. And your characters always have these awesome flaws that make them so real and life like and relate-able! I LOVE IT! So yes, I like the cast of this story thus far.

I don't know how you do it but you do this thing wherein I fall for certain characters when I know little to nothing about them. Take Eric for instance. I love him already and he took up about 40 seconds of my reading time. There's just something about him... whatever. I like him too.

In short, I'm excited about this story and seeing where you go with it. If you still need a beta, I'm always available... unless of course you still want my help with your other project and then I'll just stick to that one. Whatever, I don't mind either way.

Until we next talk ~tootles...

Wow I like this so far. I love the small details that show how Caid is able to see what is going on around him. Can't wait to read more.

I love this concept already! Can't wait to read more. :)