Reviews for A Better Place
Getuie chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
The comparisons are well thought out and the image is awesome... well done
suzieque2 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Cool, a neat perspective.
marinawings chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
dang, this is really good. i quite agree with you, too. i like how you explain heaven as everything we love on earth, only much much greater and bigger and with God.
Getuie chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
"The longest horror, fiercest cry,

The bleakest sorrow, deepest sigh,

A life of pain I’d not deny,

The cruellest death I’d not defy."

Wow... THIS is amazing! For that... it just shows Jesus' sacrifice to me. It shows the longings of my own heart. It shows the longings of yours. Masterful. Truly, truly masterful.
Wasted Postage chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
This is a beautiful poem for sure. I think the most passionate lines are:

"The longest horror, fiercest cry,

The bleakest sorrow, deepest sigh."

*AbunaiChikara
KimHua chapter 2 . 4/25/2012
Our eyes meet

indestructible now

the bond of friendship between us

entwined with a knowledge

transcending speech

indubitable now

a future of forever before us

in the arms of the greatest love

This was my favourite bit - for some reason it just stood out... I got a real sense of the incredible power of the eternal life that is ours in Christ. :-) I really liked the rhymes on the final stanza too.