Reviews for The Benefits of Being Friends
o chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
One of my favorite one shots ever.
Jodes101 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Everything a romance tale should have all in a one shot. You are a master of your game.

I am currently reading all of your work and I have noticed that some of it has been removed due to scumbag plagiarists and I was wondering if there is somewhere else I could get a hold of these works or if you have anything published.
Stephlikeswriting chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
That was adorable!
sappyromancelvr chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
d'aww. :) if only in real life..
The Smile Machine chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I haven't read some good fluff in a while, so I have chosen yours! Hope you don't disappoint *intimidating face* Just kidding. My standards aren't that high, and I know you'll go above and beyond my expectations ;) Anyway, I'm going to comment as I read because I write more that way, and I like long reviews, both writing and receiving.

Ritza like pizza! This makes me think of olives and Greek pizza. Mmmm. Don't make me hungry, I have to sleep soon and fat accumulates during sleep.

You know he's the one when he gives you the only blanket.

I believe it is somersault, not summersault :P

In the middle of this, I realized how brilliant your title is. I have severe title envy, because I never come up with good titles. So... yeah. Love your title.

I don't know how you did it, but you've made the sex sound so mundane.

Taken aback, not taken back.

D'awww. That was cute. It was quite a lot to stuff into a one-shot, but I liked it! Caden and Ritza wheee :)
Angelbaby1991 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Loved IT! :)
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Very awesome characters! I loved Ritza and Caden. They were awesome. And now they're awesome together.

I also like how their relationship grew and then went from being friends to being together. I really loved it :D
youngin-matomon chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
And once more, I have fallen in love. You are just terrible. You make up the most amazing characters and torture us with them!
Author-K-J-Lee chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
That was pretty awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
One of the cutest stories I have ever read. :) I like the twist of the whole plot. Great job!
dharney-barney chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
cute really great i loved this
absolutism chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I was looking for a story to read before I went to bed, and this is a great one. Great story, funny lines and lovely characters.
S L Siwik chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
This is one of the best one-shots I have ever read. So sweet and funny. It's an ungodly hour in the morning, so my review won't be up to snuff, but it was great to see a writer not changing POV's and yet the character's emotions were still plain to read. It's just the right amount of length, not too short,not too long- and on the last line it leaves you wanting a little more. Your writing was clean, flowed easily, and my eyes followed the story quickly getting sucked in. Fantastic job!
julianmarq chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I loved this story and I couldn't help but notice and slight change of tone right at the moment she broke things off with Brian. Up until that point everything was gray and monotonous, after that it became slightly brighter. Don't know if you did it on purpose or not but I thought it was a very nice stylistic choice.
Queen NekoChan chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Aw, so sweet :D
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