I loved this! The tension with Caden completely drove the story and it was very subtle. Can't wait to read more. See you in your other stories (which I read constantly)!

I loved this! You really captured the whole transition and as the reader I didn't feel rushed. I will definitely be rereading this in the future. :D

SO GOOD! :D Loved every bit of it. A great twist on a cliche.

love love love it!

I think this story flowed effortlessly (from a reading perspective). The characters were well depicted via dialogue/description/action. Character and romantic developments were very natural. The pacing of the story felt good and there were no unnecessary explanation or description.

Awesome job!