Reviews for The Red Envelope
AlpacaOverlord chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
This is a really interesting world these characters live in. I'm looking forward to seeing more from this. Please keep writing!
ThatBlondeGirl chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
you've got a good start here. the story line is definitly interesting!

some helpful advice, watch your tenses, make sure everything is parrallel. i noticed a few comma errors and a couple other grammar-related things, but nobody's perfect, and i encourage you to improve. i see potential here(: