Reviews for Haiku collection: Crossed Expectations
SweetChildoftheNight chapter 14 . 4/26/2012
So wenige Worte, die doch so viel sagen. Ich finds klasse.
Erlkoenigin chapter 14 . 4/26/2012
Du schilderst gut die Ambivalenz der Lieben, nämlich dass sie häufiger unglücklich als glücklich macht.

Und das mit sowenig Worten! So sollte ein Haiku sein

LG

Franziska
marinawings chapter 14 . 4/26/2012
Lovely little verse. Very profound in only a few lines.
nickyO chapter 12 . 4/26/2012
Perfect.
nickyO chapter 11 . 4/26/2012
I like this simple image turned into a spiritual moment that's also playful.
Erlkoenigin chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
tatsächlich? Irgendwie ist das auch ein buddhistischer Standtpunkt, wo gefordert wird, dass man mit allen Kreaturen Mitleid hat (und das umfaßt auch ätzende Kollegen und lästige Verflossene)
Getuie chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
Beautiful... it's truly the most awesome feeling, isn't it?
Ellerfru chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
This is beautiful!
Stratiotes chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
Isn't it just the most amazing thing? Mindblowing to say the least when we get the chance to view someone like that. Well said.
Jason J. Ross chapter 10 . 4/26/2012
A splendid collection! This is what haiku and tanka was supposed to be used for: the expression of spirit. Good work!
Faithless Juliet chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
Very nice; I like the paralle between (ugly) detail and the balance of the beauty of those last few lines. Keep up the good love,Juliet.
Erlkoenigin chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
Das könnte im Hohen Lied stehen, sehr poetisch und erotisch
Jason J. Ross chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
Beautiful! It reminds me of # 33 in The Persian Hidden Words of Baha'u'llah: "Hearken to the delightsome words of My honeyed tongue, and quaff the stream of mystic holiness from My sugar-shedding lips."
H.P Babi chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
it was sweet. i like it a lot! keep writting! choa! love, caitlin
Maisha Mafuriko chapter 8 . 4/26/2012
Talk about saying a mouthful in a few words!Totally beyond Excellant!

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