Reviews for A New, Secret, Life
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Rats! I'm sorry I keep doing this! But still, wen u use dialogue try to space them! Hope this helped, I like your story! Sorry if I confused you. I'm reviewing on my phone nd I keep clicking post! Keep going!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Whoops, I didn't finish my comment. But still about the
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Hey, loetzpoet, it thinwrist. I like this story, great plot, beautifully written! It has a few problems, but hey NO ONE is perfect. One main prob that I find tho is that you don't paragraph ur story. That gets kind of confusing, especially when using dialouge. Idk if that's how u wrote the story or it's simply the way I am seeing it since I am reading It on a mobile
Lapari Caprise chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
You read my first story so I'm reading one of yours!

It sounds good. But please add paragraphs! I got dizzy reading it.

I'm keen to read more. :)