I read your story and I really liked it. I truly appreciate both the story and your talent. I want to work on it and put in the effort as a comic commission artist. I would like to convert it into a comic, and I have some ideas that I would like to share with you. I am Dam sure you will love it.
Best regard,
amabeck25

That was really well put together, and the character names were brilliant. The names might not be very important to the readers, but to the writers you just have to find the perfect names right? Well, they were definitely perfect.

i'm asucker for nice guy stories (lol so most of my stories are about nice guys as well ) i really enjoyed this so is this just a one shot or are we going to see more coming soon . maybe with some plot twists and turns but a happy ending yet still.

Aww... *sigh* we always like the guys who won't treat us right, yeah? I'm guilty as charged...

is this your first story? its very good:D i enjoyed it, and i loved the end. can i expect a sequel, or more oneshots? i'd love to read more of your writing!