What a wonderful collection of tales taking place in such a fantastically wild place! The magic of the moon is both so fascinating and harsh. It's inspired some sketches that I want to do (even though I'm terrible at drawing). I particularly love the details that each chapter so heavily incorporates. Pliny and Frost are such fantastic characters. Pliny, even though he knows every ounce of information, still learns an important lesson of humanity with each chapter, and to me, Frost comes across as noble and kind, even though he's supposed to be an imposing figure. He has morals, and I like that. :) I particularly loved the chapter that had Rowan in it. I hope to see her again some time :) I love it! Keep up the brilliant imagination.

Okay, I enjoy this setting of yours, the Lunar Kingdoms. It's one of the more original fantasy worlds I've seen for a while (although I'm hoping Everdark comes back at some point). Given the decadence of some of the nobles, I'd expect one of the Hermetic kingdoms to have some more lethal otherworldly contraband. The second chapter seemed a bit short compared to the first, although I hope for more exploration of the different kingdoms and their inhabitants.