|Reviews for Yesterday|
| affableFacade chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
"I've become a bad memory/ To my own self now."
That was a very good turn of phrase.
This just personifies the reluctance of loss of innocence that we all must face. I see it in everybody, and everybody sees it in themselves.
I love how you write about things that matter, even if they only matter to you. I just goes to show how many people are living, and how many are just surviving.
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Lovely, but sad. You plucked some emotional strings that ring with truth.