|Reviews for Poetry Collection 1|
| Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
the repetition was tweaked ever so slightly and that alone was beautiful. but then there's the simple way that this was written that made it even better. So much description! i liked it.
| ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Wow, wonderful imagery! So I see you aren't just talented in writing stories...Random updates are better sooner rather than later:p
Okay, I am going to try to find something to criticise...um...! Okay, one thing, if you are gonna add commas, maybe add one after 'burned alive'