This is quite a nice sonnet you have here. So what if a few of the lines don't rhyme exactly? Poetry is made to bend the rules of english a bit. Just a flow of thought and emotion out onto the paper (or screen, depending on the situation). Have you tried to write a bit more to "Mysteries and Enchantments"? I was interested in seeing how that would further turn out. I added you to my author alert and favorites list for it. Well, good luck with life and writing! And could you possibly read a few of my fics and tell me what you think? Don't have to, but it would be nice to get some feedback. The "Originals" column doesn't get that much traffic.

P.S. Yaay! School's almost out!

*smile* I'm glad to hear from you again. Keep up the great poetry :)