Love this! So glad it was finally updated n alex made a move. More please! Soon!

Yay for that chapter! Love it so much.
Plz update soon

Loved it! I love everything that is going on! What does you author's note mean?

And FYI the wait was agonzing so that is really saying something. Sister PROPS to you! I will use my charge card to pay a voodoo priestess to keep our computer in good repair.
I am salivating at the thought of Chapter 19..uh-oh I might need the priestess service myself if it gets on my laptop.
Keep up the good work. And Chap 19 STAT!

Well done chapter! I'm glad he taught those punks a lesson! Looking forward to the next chapter!

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YOUR BACK! I LOVE THIS STORY! 8D The chemistry they have is crazier now. I'm so pumped to witness them talking in private and hashing some things out.
I did get your reference of The War of the Roses! Man, been a longass time since I've seen that film. Can't wait for more!

Something else had to happen in this chapter, but I left it for next one, since you've been waiting long enough. Next one should come a lot quicker now that my computer problems are coming to an end, sigh. This chapter was lost and rewritten a few times. It gave me time to decide exactly how I want it, but it might appear rushed and impatient. As usual, if you notice any mistakes please do notify me xD;.

The War of the Roses is a relatively old film for some of you, if you don't get the reference it's fine lol. I thought it was amusing (in a dark humor kind of way, where people die). Also used a last name generator for this chapter. Whoever invented it knows the struggle lol.

Well, as thanks for your patience I've planned something for next chapter hehe. Hope you haven't given up on the story. (This sounded suspiciously like a bribe xD;;. It's not just as thanks though, it was actually planned a long time ago x_x). Guess that was enough teasing. Off to sleeping, then writing :D.

Waiting anxiously!

Aw! Can't wait for the next update!

Can't wait for more! Great work!

I just read all 16 chapters in one sitting, and I got to say, I'm intrigued. I'm not entirely sure what to think about the characters yet-although I do like how this isn't a typical poor girl and rich guy story. I'm excited to see what you do next and how you develop the relationship between Alexander and Randee. I'd like to see something a bit more concrete since right now, what they have is a unstable. I would love to see some more insight into the cousin in the hospital and what exactly goes through Alex's mind. Maybe he and Randee can have another conversation in the next chapter? Sorry if my ramblings don't make complete sense :P
I hope you update soon!

I found this, stayed up and read it all in one sitting despite the ungodly hour because it's too damn engaging. It cuts me deep that this isn't finished and I honestly can't wait for more. I love the direction the story is headed in. However, I hope that Michael doesn't stop his tormenting here, as bad as that sounds. It's just that he's followed Randee for so long, almost as if it's his life mission to make her suffer. Although I loathe him immensely, in my opinion, the plot would be better if he stayed a little longer (assuming that you're beginning to cut him out already). Otherwise, write on. I look forward to future chapters (and light, humourous, heartmelting scenes between Alexander & Randee).

Wow a lot of stuff going on can't wait for the next chapter

"Suspense" of their "relationship" is killing me lol but patience is a virtue

I loved it, I loved it I loved it! Please update soon