Reviews for Love Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() D: I NEED MORE! I can't wait to see the next interaction with Alexander and Randee. Their relationship is so intriguing that I can't help but want more after I finish reading each chapter of yours. I truly enjoyed how Alexander put Michael in his place. It is exactly done to Alexander's character and makes me wonder what is going on in Alexander's head for why he pushes so hard to help Randee. Cause hes still got some ways to go before he can 100% snag Randee. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter, can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update! So happy Alexander showed Michael who's business! Anyways really loved Randee's response to everything in this chapter. I laughed when she said she was wet lol crazy girl. Great idea about keeping Alex pov separate it would definitely be a little off putting to the story. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, Alexander's certainly got a violent side. I'm intrigued! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lots more of Alex next chapter :DD. Ha, I remember when I was a teenager. Conflicting emotions were aplenty xD. And Alexander reveals his yandere side. I wonder why all my male characters seem to be on the yandere spectrum... Though compared to the rest, Alex might be the most harmless one lol (I'm including here stories not yet written). Oh well, each of my stories is a stepping stone for the next one, so some similarities should be expected xD;;. #pointless rant I wanted to include her friends in this chapter, but it didn't fit, so that'll come in a chapter or two. Poor pacing again, sigh... Almost forgot, Alex's POV won't be included in this story after all, sorry if it seemed like I was pointlessly teasing you. After thinking about it in depth, I found it wouldn't fit to suddenly introduce another POV here. So, when I get less lazy I'll write a companion, much shorter story to cover his thoughts. New scenes will be introduced (since there's plenty Randee doesn't know about his doings), and some old ones enhanced but not repeated (since that would be boring). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wonderful, now I'm all fired up for the next chapter _ |
![]() ![]() I wouldn't say Micheal is stupid. He just seems like he is a product of his upbringing, maybe? Only our illustrious author can answer this. I am so intensely craving Chapter 16 that I have taken to reading over reviews in a weak attempt to slake my thirst for more of this delicious tale. My theory on Micheal is that he has bought into the whole virgin/whore idea of women. His mother the sainted virgin was wronged because of Randee's whore of a mother was too tempting for a red blooded male to resist. Of course, the onus was not on his father to resist because nothing proves you're a real man like using the ole penis whenever the opportunity arises. Of course since his father and mother are the real victims, ever so rightfully aggrieved, aren't they just, it only makes sense that Randee would become the target for his rancor. And of course he too has been wronged by Randee. When she was unattractive she still needed to be punished for being born to her mother and put in her place. Now that she's looking mighty fine she really owes it to him to let his penis enjoy it. Part of me actually feels for Michael too. He seems on the emotionally stunted side. |
![]() ![]() Ha, you faced my biggest concern. Michael seems quiet stupid. But I can relate to her manner of thinking. |
![]() ![]() So happy you updated, this chapter made me so happy with alex coming back, honestly I dont mind you writing in Randee's perspective I just want the plot to keep moving because idk I really like this story and I just cant believe you ended it there. It was quite dramatic but a good read! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() So maybe she did over would do well to pain with a narrower brush, she was a bit broad with her strokes and tainted Alex with it. That said Alex needs a smack up side the head ;p |
![]() ![]() I'd really like that. I'd really like that! Would I care to hear Alex's perspective? For fricking sure! But I am just overly excited to see what happens next even if its from Marc's perspective. |
![]() ![]() Wherever and whenever you want to put in PLEASE DO! I want to get inside 'the boy's' head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to read an alex-chappie! |
![]() ![]() Please don't change POV! In my opinion, character POV changes ruin the flow of the story. Keep the mystery in Alex and his will have a bigger impact to know his feelings in the end! Love this story! |
![]() ![]() Why Alex? Why you're smarter than this! XXOXOXOXOOX KarasUno can't wait for Chapter 16. I am curious. Randee seems to think about 10 yrs in the future pretty often. Will we see them in 10 years time? If so my money is on her being much more than just a blip. |