Reviews for Love Life
SkipperCal3 chapter 23 . 10/20/2015
I can't tell you exactly how many times I came across this story and read it over and over and over again, praying each time that you would update it. But hey, it's an amazing story with real characters and something is better than nothing.
I like the fact that Randee is not so caught up in Alexander to the extent where she doesn't realize his stalker tendencies, granted she might just be paranoid and Michael was just being a dick. She isn't oblivious to the fact that something may be off with him.
I honestly adore Alex's character, the way he handles himself is just too much lol #soCute.
The emotions portrayed by the characters are very believable. I think that is the key to a sucessful story.
lol I have to admit that the most exciting parts are when Alex gets up close and personal with her.
quit chapter 23 . 10/14/2015
It definitely makes me upset that you haven't posted in a while, this story is amazing. I can't help but keep reading. Seriously, please update when you can!

I would also really appreciate if you or your reviewers would take some time to read my new story just posted. I haven't written in a while and constructive criticism would be really appreciated!
AnimalRK chapter 17 . 9/26/2015
I fucking love the main character, girl's got spunk.
Javeria chapter 23 . 9/18/2015
Its an amazing story. Please update.
bev chapter 23 . 9/3/2015
Loved the chapter :)
TheGirlWithTheNotepad chapter 23 . 8/3/2015
OK so, this is fabulous. I love how different the characters are, like how the popular girls are the nice ones and Randee is by no means a victim. It's nice to see. Also, I really like Alex and the dynamic the two of them have going. Please keep updating!
EllySky chapter 23 . 7/31/2015
very sweet xxx
chuckythecat chapter 23 . 7/29/2015
Ahhh! I love this story! I just started reading it last night and lemme tell you, it's AMAZING! I do hope Alex is a good person, even tho he has some serious issues but I'm assuming it's bc he's rich and his parents werebt prolly there for him most of his life. Anyway, he and Randee are literally cute together and I want them to get closer and be all lovey dovey cus I wanna see that side of Alex. Anyway, hope you update soon!
mylittleprincess chapter 23 . 7/29/2015
Not happy chapter 1 . 7/26/2015

Are you just putting anything out?

Thankfully I have Noble Wolf to read now. This story has seriously taken a nosedive. Seriously.
Daniaisme chapter 23 . 7/26/2015
Lol the struggle is real. Y'know it's not as big of a weakness as you might think, some stories are plot-driven - yours is character-driven.
I like it anyhow.
Their interactions are so cuuute too
MademoiselleS chapter 23 . 7/25/2015
I've been reading this story since you first published it and I immediately fell in love with it. Unfortunately it has been going a bit downhill lately quality wise. I don't mind things happening through dialogue, in fact I really like stories that do that though there has to be a balance. "Love Life" feels like the story is progressing without really moving forward. The characters personalities don't show through as much as they initially did making them feel less relatable. Also, all of Randee and Alex's interactions are so cryptic and hard to follow because they always seem so interested in one-upping each other. Reading the first few chapters and then reading the last few feels like a different person is writing this story now. I still like it but it feels different.

About this chapter, I don't like how Randee normalizing Alex's stalkerish behaviour compared to Annette's. The one thing I really like about Randee compared to other heroine's in most romance fictions is that she immediately called people out on their sh*t. Her saying Alex's stalking is "better" because he thinks he's protecting her is just normalizing and enabling potential abusive behaviour. I'm sure Annette also thought she was also just doing normal protective things too by keeping close tabs on Alex so I don't think it's right to say that Alex showing up and practically abducting her while making a promise to continue doing so is endearing.
LetMeWonder chapter 23 . 7/24/2015
I actually really love your dialogues. :) thanks so much for updating!
TicoTaco chapter 23 . 7/24/2015
Awesome chapter, I was waiting for this for so long , because I really thought that there was something fishy or she was walking in a trap and now what's his reaction on the Danny matter and all that.
Blackdraumdancer chapter 23 . 7/24/2015
Thanks for the update, late or not, I dont care all that much. I just want to read the rest of the story ;)
I rather enjoy that this story is based so much on dialogue and introspektion rather than action, cause it makes for far better worked-out characters, which I enjoy immensely.
Also your dialogues always come along with very good descriptions of their respective non-verbal communication, which is essential for every conversation but very few writers actually include in their stories or are even observant enough of these things to do so. And I just love the witty humor between Randee and Alex :D
All these things make you a very good writer of conversations and I believe that is a stenght of yours, not a weakness of this story at all. Its not boring or anything, I think its actually quite realistic, because, really, whose (high school-) life is "action"-packed. *laughs* Actually, with dating the top-guy of the school, 2 trips abroad and the bullying in school, all of that in not even a full year is already quite action-filled for a normal high school-girl, no?
Anyway, Im looking forward to the next chapter :)
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