Reviews for Little Angel
Carina Yuan chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
I am a huge fan of the repetition in this. Lovely job.
my.life.is.over chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Again. This was astounding. I really really like this one. Good good good job. :)
Jenny Sue chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Very beautiful and sad :( The repetition of 'little angel' was really nice, and I liked how that refrain seems to get more frequent as the poem goes on. It almost feels like it should be a song for some reason :)

The only bit that felt a bit jarring to the flow was 'To the touch, so cold is your skin'. I guess it needed to be like that to rhyme, but it felt like an awkward order of words.

But really nice poem, good job :)

-JB
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
If I were to describe this poem in one word, it would definitely be touching, but it's so much more than that. It feels very motherly, feels gentle but sad, and it simply begs a song.
ToeshoeMezzo chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
This is both amazing and horribly sad...