Reviews for The Wait
Mirimo27 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Oh, woohoo your first on poetry!~ X3 Though I didn't notice it was refered to more than one individual until you stopped using the line "I wait for him" and started using "we wait for him" instead after the first comma... XD Well, gotta say even if this was your first, I personally really love the ideal imagery for this poem Keep it up! I encourage you to write more poetry in the future! X]
RomanticNerd4Ever chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
I don't normally read poetry on FictionPress but something told me to read yours. I'm happy I did because I love this poem :D It's so sweet and so beautiful! I love it :D