Nice

Loved the original story but omgosh didnt even know how much i wanted that evan story i really hope you can make something with someone like him as a main character it was amazing

Wow! That was yummy! Nick drives me crazy! I really want to see him with Evan! I like how you write sex scenes. They don't get bland or predictable. The characters are interesting and vibrant. Very nice. Xoxo Robin

Yay! Finally Nick has stopped being stupid! Woo! So heart wrenching. I loved it. And the world you built is fascinating. Excellent job. Though your comment at the end made me feel like you don't appreciate reviews that are short. That made me feel not good, like when I don't have the time or energy for something longer my review isn't wanted or appreciated. That was kind of not a good feeling. Anyway, I really enjoyed the story! Xoxo Robin

That was intense! Nice job! Xoxo Robin

What are you talking about? ! The sex in that chapter was perfect! Also damn you Nick for being an idiot! Xoxo Robin

So you're just never going to put up the epilogue? A little bratty, but who am I to judge. I did like the ending, but getting there was... interesting. Nick is a brat who I thought didn't deserve anyone. I still think that, he has too much self hate to actually care about anyone else, that is until he gets his big realization at the end. If it weren't for Arian wanting him so badly I still would think he should have ended up alone, but since Arian loves him so damn much... va tutto bene. Although the way he hurt Arian is no buona and I think he's a dick for that.

wouldve loved if he ended up choosing evan... lol

I'm actually part way through chapter two. I have enjoyed the story so far, but Nick seems extremely delusional. He's obviously horrible at sports and his team members have obviously treated him like shit, yet somehow he thinks he'll become "cool" really soon. It's kinda hard to believe he could be that clueless. Then again why is he even on the teams when he's not good at sports. That part didn't make much sense as he should have had to try out to make the teams he's been on then kicked off of. I only mean these comments as constructional criticism.

Just finished chapter 4. That was grueling but totally worth it. I think Nick needed to go through all that, though. Arian it's worth it. I was disappointed at the end that you demanded long reviews though. That's kind of not cool. It's also really dismissive of the shorter reviews people leave. Refusing to post unless you get so many reviews it's bad enough, but refusing to write unless you get long reviews? That's pretty bad. I have really enjoyed your story though, and I have reviewed every chapter because I thought it was worth it, not because I was pushed into it. Xoxo Robin

Thank god! Nick is doing something right!

Goddammit, Nick,!

I'm on chapter 1. You totally got me. I was practically yelling at Nick through my phone screen. I can't wait to see what's next. Xoxo Robin

So no Eric (who I kept praying was to take Nick's v.) and Evan?

Darn.

Wow. I knew there was five chapters, so I was expecting some more conflict to come out of nowhere. It wasn't until the end where I like, "Ooohh. We're clear."

Anyway, I love this. I can't believe I avoided reading this for so long. Well, I didn't avoid, I just didn't click on it. But! I did now. Yay!

Gosh. I love Nick and Arian.