|Reviews for strings of a heart|
| Loqwell chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Is English not your first language? You seem to have such lovely descriptions and creativity, but they're terribly stifled by the lack of easily readable English. I really do hope you keep practicing though. What managed to peek through seemed to be very rich and definitely needs to be able to show.
| Agha Wahaj chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
nIcE StOrY ... fUlL Of eMoTiOnS ... ur story is telling about that person who was broken and fed up with life and dont wants to live ... so nice work nii san sis ... in fiction u used real behaviour of human ... :)