|Reviews for Story of Horror|
| AngelofDarkness1220 chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
I disagree with this other person, this story may be alittle disturbing but it is not as childish as you are saying it is. I think this is a amazing author who puts her heart and soul in this stuff and should keep writing. I love your work The Girl that writes and think you should keep writing.
Angel of Darkness
| Joseph Kiley chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Meh. It's obvious you're pretty young, so I'll go with that. It was adequately creepy, however there are some problems with it. If you hadn't slept in months, you would have had some severe adverse effects from sleep deprivation. The record for sleeplessness is 18 days I believe. There are some grammatical and stylistic hiccups, which is fine. The "becoming the antagonist" twist is a bit cliched and predicable. Overall, it's a pretty good piece for a young writer.