|Reviews for The Blood Diamond|
| AkeraWriterOfTheNight chapter 25 . 1/15/2013
OMG! ILOVE IT! PLEAS UPDATE SOON!
| Lori Jane Summers chapter 25 . 1/8/2013
love this XP
| BloodWillSpill chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
The first thing I noticed was that your first paragraph is ridiculously long. I'm not saying it's bad, it just kind of turns me off from the story. And then you forgot to break up the dialogue between Ethan and Toni. Besides those few problems, your story still kept me reading. Hope I helped!
| I caught myself chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
I really like this story so far but you need to work on spacing your paragraphs properly. Otherwise though, this is really well written and im enjoying reading it. Well DOne.
| Kori08 chapter 25 . 8/30/2012
You're very welcome it was fun co writting cant wait to do more
| Kori08 chapter 23 . 8/25/2012
I just loved helping you write this chapter its about time there be some "pillows" x3 lol cant wait to help on the next one
| kori co-writter chapter 23 . 8/25/2012
I personally loved because without me it wouldn't have surfaced lol i loved this chapter and i loved writing it with you rjcity
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/23/2012
Good job so far
| Miles-tails-prowler chapter 7 . 8/11/2012
Vampire proof dress? What? Completely lost me there. What makes it vampire proof?
| invisible0kid chapter 16 . 7/30/2012
i just noticed the trilogy thing, kool! :) plz update soon!
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/20/2012
awsome! plz update soon! :)
| Toshi chapter 15 . 7/19/2012
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/15/2012
just read for the first time great story
| Awesomeness21 chapter 2 . 4/11/2012
omg it just got more interesting
i love your story so far..
| Awesomeness21 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
I like it...
Im so interested in what happens in the club...
Ima read more..