|Reviews for Fallen|
| MentalBrink chapter 2 . 4/15/2012
This has a fluid start and fair character development, and although it's shortness hinders it a bit I like it :)
| Punslinger chapter 2 . 4/12/2012
Nice chapter. The characters are shaping up well.
(A short review for a short chapter.)
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
This is a very good introductory chapter. You've set up the characters and plot clearly enough to make readers want to learn what will happen next. I wonder what part Shaya's fascination with magik will play in the story?